Business Grammar
Concise & Professional (C1)
✂️ 1. Conciseness (Cutting Fluff)
Business readers are busy. Remove "dummy subjects" and redundancies.
Wordy (Fluff)
There are many employees who are complaining about the AC.
Concise
Many employees are complaining about the AC.
⚖️ 2. Active vs. Passive
Use Active to take responsibility. Use Passive to soften bad news.
We made a mistake. (Active)
A mistake was made. (Passive)
📑 3. Nominalization
Turning verbs into nouns creates a formal, objective tone for reports.
Casual (Verb-heavy)
If we implement the plan incorrectly...
Formal (Noun-heavy)
Incorrect implementation of the plan...
The Email Fix 📧
Turn this messy email into a pro one.
Subject: Meeting
Hi Team,
I am writing to you because there is a need to talk about the budget. Basically, we spent too much money.
It is important that we have a meeting soon.
I am writing to you because there is a need to talk about the budget. Basically, we spent too much money.
It is important that we have a meeting soon.
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Subject: Budget Discussion
Hi Team,
We the budget because we exceeded our limit.
Please a meeting soon.
We the budget because we exceeded our limit.
Please a meeting soon.
Changes made:
- Removed "I am writing to you because..." (Redundant).
- "There is a need to talk" ➔ "We need to discuss".
- "It is important that we have" ➔ "Please schedule".
Professional Check 👔
Select the most professional option.
Goal: Be Concise.
Goal: Formal Report (Nominalization).
Goal: Soften Bad News (Passive).
Mission 📝
Rewrite sentences.
Refine these:
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1. "Basically, at this point in time, we are not ready."
➔ We are not ready. -
2. "There are many customers who want a refund."
➔ Many customers... -
3. "We need to analyze the data." (Make it formal)
➔ Data...