B2 Lesson 1: Analyzing Audience and Purpose for Stylistic Choices
Welcome to a new B2 series on effective writing. At this level, it's not enough to be grammatically correct; you must also be situationally appropriate. The best writers make conscious, strategic choices about their language based on two key factors: their audience1 and their purpose2.
Today, we will learn how to analyze any writing task to choose the perfect style, or register3.
The Pre-Writing Analysis Framework
Before you write a single word, you should always stop and ask yourself these questions. The answers will guide all of your stylistic choices.
- Who is my audience? (A specific person? A group? Their title? My relationship to them?)
- What is my primary purpose? (To inform, persuade, request, complain, apologize?)
- What do I want the audience to think, feel, or do after reading? (Approve my request? Forgive me? Understand a problem?)
- Therefore, what is the best register? (Formal, neutral, or informal?)
Case Study: Two Emails, One Goal
Imagine this scenario: Your company is hosting a charity run to raise money for a local school in Siem Reap. Your goal is to get people to participate. Look at how you would write to two different audiences.
Email 1: To a Close Colleague
Subject: Charity run this weekend!
Hey Dara,
How's it going? Just wanted to know if you're signing up for the charity run on Saturday? It's for a great cause, and it should be a lot of fun. Let me know if you're in!
Cheers,
Vuthy
To: Manager, ABC Corp.
Subject: Invitation to Participate: Annual Charity Run
Dear Mr. Chan,
I am writing on behalf of the social committee at our company to formally invite you and your staff to participate in our Annual Charity Run on Saturday, June 21, 2025.
This event aims to raise funds for a new library at the Angkor High School. We believe this is a wonderful team-building opportunity and a chance to support our local community. Further details are attached. We hope you will consider joining us.
Best regards,
Vuthy
Analysis: The purpose is similar (get people to join), but the audience is completely different. The first email is informal to a friend—it uses contractions, casual language, and is very direct. The second is formal and polite—it explains the purpose, highlights the benefits for the recipient's company ("team-building"), and uses professional language.
✍️ B2 Pre-Writing Analysis Checklist
- ✔️ I have clearly identified my audience and my relationship to them.
- ✔️ I have a single, clear purpose for my writing.
- ✔️ I have considered the desired action or feeling I want from my reader.
- ✔️ I have made a conscious choice to use a formal, neutral, or informal register.
🧠 Practice Quiz: Analyze the Scenario
Read the scenario below. What is the most appropriate audience, purpose, and register?
Scenario: The air conditioner in your apartment is broken. It is very hot. You need to write to your landlord, Mr. Lim, to get it fixed.
- Audience: A friend. Purpose: To chat. Register: Informal.
- Audience: Mr. Lim (Landlord). Purpose: To request a repair. Register: Formal/Neutral.
- Audience: The government. Purpose: To complain. Register: Very Formal.
Answer: B. The audience is your landlord (a business relationship), the purpose is a request for action, and the register should be polite and respectful but direct (Formal or Neutral).
📝 Homework: Analyze and Plan
Your homework is to practice analyzing a writing task before you write.
Scenario: You bought a new phone online, but the company sent you the wrong color. You need to write an email to the company's customer service department.
Your Task: In your notebook, answer the four questions from the "Pre-Writing Analysis Framework" for this scenario.
- Who is my audience?
- What is my primary purpose?
- What action do I want from them?
- What is the best register to use?
Vocabulary Glossary
- Audience: (Noun) - អ្នកអាន/អ្នកស្តាប់ - The person or group of people you are writing for. ↩
- Purpose: (Noun) - គោលបំណង - Your reason for writing; what you want to achieve. ↩
- Register: (Noun) - កម្រិតភាសា - The level of formality in your language (e.g., formal, informal). ↩
- Stylistic Choice: (Noun Phrase) - ការជ្រើសរើសស្ទីល - A conscious decision a writer makes about the words and structures they use to create a certain effect. ↩
- To analyze: (Verb) - វិភាគ - To examine something in detail to understand it better. ↩