Grammar: 💡 Effective Word Choice & Style - Intermediate/Advanced (B2) - Lesson 7: Identifying & Correcting Misplaced/Dangling Modifiers

Grammar: Sentence Structure

B2 Lesson 7: Correcting Misplaced & Dangling Modifiers

What you will learn: By the end of this lesson, you will be able to identify and correct misplaced and dangling modifiers to create clear and logical sentences.

Why It Matters: Avoiding Confusion

A modifier is a word or phrase that describes something. Placing it in the wrong spot can create a confusing or unintentionally funny sentence.

❌ Confusing Sentence

The man sold a motorbike to his friend with a broken headlight.

(This sounds like the friend has a broken headlight!)

✅ Clear & Logical Sentence

The man sold a motorbike with a broken headlight to his friend.

(Now it's clear the motorbike has the broken headlight.)

The Grammar Rules 📖

Rule 1: Misplaced Modifiers

A misplaced modifier is a descriptive phrase that is in the wrong place.
The Fix: Place modifiers as close as possible to the word they are describing.

Rule 2: Dangling Modifiers

A dangling modifier is a descriptive phrase where the thing being described is missing from the sentence.

Incorrect: "Riding the Bamboo Train, the countryside was beautiful."

(This sounds like the countryside was riding the train!)


The Fix (Option 1): Add the correct subject after the phrase.
"Riding the Bamboo Train, we saw the beautiful countryside."

The Fix (Option 2): Turn the phrase into a full clause.
"While we were riding the Bamboo Train, the countryside was beautiful."

Grammar Toolkit 🛠️

Modifier Checklist

When you edit your writing, ask these questions:

  • Is every descriptive phrase right next to the word it describes?
  • For phrases at the start of a sentence (e.g., "Hoping for a good price,..."), is the subject doing the action right after the comma?
  • Have I read my sentences aloud to check for any funny or confusing meanings?

Practice Your Grammar 🎯

Quiz: Spot the Error!

  1. Sentence: "Covered in delicious coconut sauce, the tourists enjoyed the fish amok."
    Problem: Misplaced Modifier. It sounds like the tourists were covered in sauce.
    Correction: The tourists enjoyed the fish amok, which was covered in delicious coconut sauce.
  2. Which sentence is correct?
    a) After waiting for an hour, the bus finally arrived.
    b) After I waited for an hour, the bus finally arrived.
    Answer: b. Sentence 'a' has a dangling modifier (it sounds like the bus was waiting).

Your Grammar Mission ⭐

Writing Task: Fix the Sentences

Rewrite the following sentences to correct the misplaced or dangling modifiers.

  1. While riding my moto, a dog ran out in front of me.
  2. The woman sold the watch to her friend with a dead battery.
  3. To improve his English, many books were read.
Show Answers
  1. While I was riding my moto, a dog ran out in front of me.
  2. The woman sold the watch with a dead battery to her friend.
  3. To improve his English, he read many books.

Key Vocabulary

  • Modifier (Noun) | ឃ្លាបញ្ជាក់ន័យ
    A word or phrase that describes or provides more information about another word.
  • Misplaced Modifier (Noun Phrase)
    A modifier that is in the wrong place, creating a confusing or funny meaning.
  • Dangling Modifier (Noun Phrase)
    A modifier where the word it is supposed to describe is missing from the sentence.
  • Clarity (Noun) | ភាពច្បាស់លាស់
    The quality of being easy to understand.

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