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The Editor's Eye
ភ្នែកអ្នកកែសម្រួល
At the C1 level, peer review is not just finding spelling mistakes. It is about evaluating flow, impact, and style.
នៅកម្រិត C1 ការត្រួតពិនិត្យអត្ថបទមិនមែនគ្រាន់តែរកកំហុសអក្ខរាវិរុទ្ធទេ។ វាគឺការវាយតម្លៃទៅលើភាពរលូន និងស្ទីលនៃការសរសេរ។
The Feedback Sandwich 🥪
វិធីសាស្ត្រផ្តល់មតិកែលម្អ
How to structure your critique professionally:
1. Positive Comment
(ចាប់ផ្តើមដោយការសរសើរ)
2. Constructive Criticism
(ប្រាប់ពីចំណុចដែលត្រូវកែតម្រូវ)
3. Encouraging Closing
(បញ្ចប់ដោយការលើកទឹកចិត្ត)
C1 Focus Areas 🔍
ចំណុចសំខាន់ៗដែលត្រូវផ្តោតពេលកែអត្ថបទ
🔗 1. Cohesion & Flow
- Are the transitions natural? (តើការភ្ជាប់ប្រយោគរលូនឬទេ?)
- Are they using advanced linkers? (e.g., Furthermore, Nevertheless)
🎭 2. Register & Tone
- Is the vocabulary appropriately formal? (តើពាក្យពេចន៍សមស្របនឹងកម្រិតឬទេ?)
🏗️ 3. Structural Variety
- Are there complex sentences? (Inversions, Conditionals, Passives)
Diplomatic Language 🗣️
ការប្រើប្រាស់ភាសាការទូត (គួរសម)
Soften your critique to sound supportive, not aggressive.
"This word is wrong."
"You might want to consider using..."
"This paragraph is confusing."
"To enhance the flow here, perhaps..."
"Change this sentence."
"It could read better if you..."
The Vague Feedback Trap!
Don't just say "It's good" or "It's bad".
(កុំគ្រាន់តែនិយាយថា "ល្អ" ឬ "មិនល្អ"។ ត្រូវបញ្ជាក់ពីមូលហេតុ និងដំណោះស្រាយ!)
"The vocabulary is bad." ❌
"You could elevate the register by changing 'get' to 'acquire'." ✔️
Editor's Quiz ⚡
ការសាកល្បងសមត្ថភាព ⚡
Diplomatic Phrasing
Which is the most appropriate way to suggest a change?
The Feedback Sandwich
What is the correct order for giving feedback?
Identify the Issue
"The economic policy was implemented. The inflation rates continued to rise."
តើប្រយោគនេះខ្វះអ្វី?
Mission 📝
បេសកកម្ម 📝
The Peer Review Task
ការអនុវត្តត្រួតពិនិត្យអត្ថបទ
Trade paragraphs with a partner (or use a sample text). Do the following: