intertwined_stories Speaking: Storytelling & Narrative Skills B2 - Lesson 2: Structuring Complex Narratives with Subplots
Welcome back! While simple stories follow a single, linear path, the most memorable and engaging narratives often have multiple layers. At the B2 level, we can learn to weave1 a secondary story, or subplot2, into our main story. This adds depth, creates tension, and makes your storytelling much more sophisticated.
Main Plot vs. Subplot
A complex narrative3 has two key components:
Main Plot
This is the primary story, the main goal or conflict. It answers the question: "What is this story mostly about?"
Example: My goal was to get a promotion at work.
Subplot
This is a smaller, secondary story that happens at the same time. It often complicates or influences the main plot.
Example: At the same time, my relationship with my best friend, who was also my colleague, was becoming very competitive.
How to Structure a Narrative with a Subplot
Follow these steps to build a more complex story.
- Introduce the Main Plot: Start by setting up your main goal or situation.
- Introduce the Subplot: Use a transition phrase to bring in the secondary story.
Phrases: "Meanwhile...", "At the same time...", "The thing was, while this was happening..." - Develop and Connect Them: Show how the two plots influenced each other. Did the subplot create a problem for the main plot? Or did it help solve it?
- Resolve Both Plots: A satisfying story brings both the main plot and the subplot to a conclusion, often at the same time (the climax4).
Scenario: A Story with a Subplot
Listen to this story about preparing for an important exam. Notice how the speaker weaves the main plot (studying) with a subplot (a family problem).
(Main Plot Intro) "The biggest challenge of my university life was preparing for my final law exam. I needed to get a high score to qualify for a scholarship."
(Subplot Intro) "**At the same time,** my family was facing a difficult situation; my grandmother, who lived with us, fell ill and needed a lot of care."
(Development & Connection) "So, during the day, I was trying to study complex legal texts, but my mind was often preoccupied with my grandmother's health. I felt torn. Some days, I had to miss my study group sessions to take her to the hospital, and I fell behind. **As a consequence,** my stress levels were incredibly high."
(Climax & Resolution) "A week before the exam, my grandmother's health started to improve significantly. Seeing her get better gave me a huge sense of relief and the motivation I needed. I studied non-stop for that final week. I passed the exam with a high score, and a month later, both my grandmother was healthy and I had my scholarship. It felt like I had overcome two huge challenges at once."
Transition Phrases for Switching Plots
To move smoothly between your main plot and subplot, use clear transition phrases.
To Introduce a Subplot:
- "Meanwhile..."
- "At the same time..."
- "In the background of all this..."
- "The backstory here is that..."
To Show How the Plots Connect:
- "Because of this,..."
- "This had a direct impact on..."
- "As a consequence,..."
Practice Quiz: Identify the Plot Elements
Story: "My main goal was to save enough money to buy a new motorbike. Meanwhile, I was also taking an evening class in English to improve my job prospects. The class was expensive, which made it harder to save. However, the English skills I learned helped me get a better-paying job, which allowed me to save money much faster and buy the motorbike."
Question: In this narrative, how does the subplot influence the main plot?
- It had no effect on the main plot.
- It first created a problem (costing money) but then provided the solution (leading to a better job).
- It was a completely separate story.
→ Answer: B. The subplot (English class) first made the main plot (saving money) more difficult, but ultimately helped to resolve it. This is a classic example of an effective subplot.
Your Mission: Tell a Richer Story
Your mission is to practice telling a story with both a main plot and a subplot.
- Think of a time you were working toward a major goal. This is your Main Plot. (e.g., "I was training for my first 10k race.")
- Think of something else important that was happening in your life at the same time. This is your Subplot. (e.g., "At the same time, I was also helping my friend plan their wedding.")
- Plan your story. How did the subplot affect the main plot? Did planning the wedding make you too tired to train? Or did training help you deal with the stress of the wedding plans?
- Record yourself telling the story for 90 seconds. Try to use the structure from this lesson to weave the two stories together into a single, compelling narrative.
Vocabulary Glossary
- To Weave: (Verb) - ត្បាញ - To combine facts, events, and details together to create a story. ↩
- Subplot: (Noun) - គ្រោងរង - A secondary storyline in a narrative that runs alongside the main story. ↩
- Narrative: (Noun) - ការនិទានរឿង / ការរៀបរាប់ - A story or a description of a series of connected events. ↩
- Climax: (Noun) - ចំណុចកំពូល - The most intense, exciting, or important point of a story. ↩
- Plot: (Noun) - ដំណើររឿង / ផែនការ - The main sequence of events in a play, novel, movie, or similar work. ↩