Writing: Cohesion & Flow
C1 Lesson 5: Advanced Cohesive Devices
Model Text ✍️
Read this short paragraph about the development of Phnom Penh. Notice how the highlighted words create a smooth and logical flow between the ideas.
Phnom Penh has experienced rapid economic growth in the past decade, leading to a modernizing skyline. Furthermore, its infrastructure has significantly improved, making the city more accessible. Nevertheless, this rapid development has also led to challenges such as increased traffic congestion. Consequently, city planners are now focused on developing sustainable public transportation solutions.
Breaking Down the Model
Let's analyze the job of each cohesive device in the model text.
Your Writer's Toolkit 🛠️
Advanced Linking Words (Cohesive Devices)
1. Adding & Reinforcing Ideas
- Furthermore / Moreover: Used to add another significant point.
- In addition to (+ -ing/noun): Used to add to a previous point.
2. Showing Contrast & Concession
- Nevertheless / Nonetheless: A strong word for a surprising contrast.
- Conversely: Used to introduce a completely opposite idea.
- Admittedly: Used to agree with an opposing point before you refute it.
3. Showing Result & Concluding
- Consequently / As a result: Shows a direct result.
- In essence: To summarize a complex point.
Practice & Application 🎯
Quiz: Choose the Right Device
Choose the most logical cohesive device to complete each sentence.
- The plan is well-researched and has strong financial backing. _______, it has the full support of the community.
→ Answer: Furthermore (This adds another strong, positive point.) - He is extremely wealthy. _______, he lives a very simple and humble life.
→ Answer: Conversely (This introduces a directly opposite idea.) - The company did not listen to customer feedback. _______, its sales declined sharply.
→ Answer: As a result (The decline is a direct result.)
Your Writing Mission ⭐
Writing Task: Connect Your Ideas
Combine these pairs of sentences using an appropriate cohesive device from the lesson. Remember to use correct punctuation!
- He is a world-renowned expert in his field. He has written three best-selling books on the topic.
→ Example Answer: He is a world-renowned expert in his field; moreover, he has written three best-selling books on the topic. - The storm was very strong. The ancient temple was not damaged.
→ Example Answer: The storm was very strong. Nevertheless, the ancient temple was not damaged.
Key Vocabulary
- Cohesive DeviceWords and phrases that act like glue to link text together smoothly (e.g., however, furthermore).
- Coherence The quality of being logical and consistent, making something easy to understand.
- Concession The act of admitting that something is true, often before making a counter-argument.