Writing: Sentence Structure
B1 Lesson: Connecting Your Ideas
Model: From Simple to Fluent ✍️
Writing in only short, simple sentences can sound robotic. Let's see how connecting our ideas can make a paragraph sound much more natural and impressive.
I have a friend. Her name is Lina. She lives in Battambang. She is a teacher. She works at a school. The school is near the river.
I have a friend named Lina, and she lives in Battambang. She is a teacher who works at a school that is near the river.
Your Writer's Toolkit 🛠️
Tool #1: Coordinating Conjunctions (FANBOYS)
Use these words to connect two complete sentences. Remember the acronym FANBOYS: For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So.
- "I wanted to visit the museum, but it was closed." (Shows contrast)
- "He was very hungry, so he ate two bowls of noodles." (Shows a result)
Punctuation Tip: When you connect two full sentences with a FANBOYS conjunction, use a comma before it.
Tool #2: Relative Clauses (who, which, that)
Use these to add extra information about a noun. This is a great way to combine sentences.
- who (for people): "My friend, who is a teacher, lives in Battambang."
- which (for things): "I visited Wat Ek Phnom, which is an ancient temple."
- that (for people or things): "This is the book that I bought yesterday."
Practice Combining Sentences 🎯
Exercise: Combine the Sentences
Combine the two simple sentences into one better sentence using the word in brackets.
- He was hungry. He ate a big bowl of noodles. (so)
→ He was hungry, so he ate a big bowl of noodles. - She has a brother. He is a doctor. (who)
→ She has a brother who is a doctor. - I want to go to the Bamboo Train. It is raining. (but)
→ I want to go to the Bamboo Train, but it is raining.
Review Checklist
When you write, check for these things to improve your sentence structure.
- Have I connected some of my short sentences?
- Did I use a comma before conjunctions like 'and', 'but', and 'so'?
- Did I use 'who' for people and 'which'/'that' for things?
Your Writing Mission ⭐
Writing Task: Improve the Paragraph
Rewrite this paragraph in your notebook. Use conjunctions and relative clauses to connect the simple sentences and make it more fluent.
"Yesterday I visited my friend. My friend lives in Battambang. His name is Sam. We went to a cafe. The cafe is very popular. It is near the river. We drank coffee. We talked for two hours. It was a good day."
Show Example Answer
"Yesterday I visited my friend Sam, who lives in Battambang. We went to a popular cafe which is near the river. We drank coffee and talked for two hours, so it was a good day."
Key Vocabulary
- Fluent Able to speak or write a language easily and smoothly.
- Conjunction A word used to connect clauses or sentences (e.g., and, but, so).
- Relative Clause A clause which gives more information about a noun, often starting with who, which, or that.